I will not belong to destinization.
Quiet CAN NOT show you enough about me but Noisy CAN NOT tell you all of me, too. Just a phrase is the most reasonable, that's Based on your feeling. I hope to make more friends here because this is the first time also the first year, so I need friends!!!
Conan, from my saying is that you should have your thesis inside your conclusion. Your opening is good but then when I look at your conclusion it confuse me, the rest is fantastic. Next time keep up the good work.
Conan, from my saying is that you should have your thesis inside your conclusion. Your opening is good but then when I look at your conclusion it confuse me, the rest is fantastic. Next time keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteyour essay is great, but like Samantha said, your conclusion confuse me
ReplyDeleteYour essay is very good. It is effective and clearly. You did a great job. Keep trying.
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